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Awakened arrest—
our breathless adoration
when love is breathing.
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Haiku IVby tickersymbol

Literature / Poetry / Human Nature / Haiku & Eastern©2013-2014 tickersymbol
I know this haiku doesn't directly mention nature, but in my humble opinion, it's ultimately only about nature when love is breathing.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
nice
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol i try to stay away from the sensual stuff but this was relatively clean and ultimately irresistable, as well as unique
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You wrote this about the same time you faved Hyperbole's Kiss...was this comment perhaps for that poem? :)
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. Duh. :)
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Wordeea Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
so true, so beautifully said
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :heart:
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It begs to be read over and again, each time felt deeper.
A lovely, lovely haiku. :heart:
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tickersymbol Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That is exactly how I felt about your short verse posted earlier today...words now etched in my soul. Thank you! :heart:
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