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To what conditions must I comply
when prompted to write
of what dwells inside?

'Tis always my voice I aim to speak
with pen in hand, bleeding ink,
as does my heart, spilling words
upon a page, perhaps unheard
save by me, myself, and I -
imagination amplified!

Eclectic fragments in the mind -
to each his own for these are mine;
thereby forming how they will
in fluid flight with feathered quill,
as freedom flows with expression
of fantasy or pure confession.

Symbolic makings of the soul
take shape as musical rhymes unfold.
Whilst not perfected or contrived,
'tis how this poem became alive;
for thus am I, in each rendition,
still my own poetic condition.

Though others may fuel
a new thought or two,
to who I am, I shall remain true!
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Written for Poetical Condition's bi-monthly prompt - one's own interpretation of poetical condition. I approached this prompt wondering what "conditions" (if any) deem a piece of writing to be good poetry. Is there a set of prescribed rules or certain expectations to which I must adhere? The only thing that rang absolutely true to me was remaining true to my own voice. Though this poem has already gone through several renditions, my voice was clear in each one and remains so still.
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This is just the style I want to achieve. Personal and yet so natural in what it says. And though I don't feel everything, I relate to some, and dare call it a crystal clear peek into a soul. It's very impressive.
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~tickersymbol Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! Hope I don't scare you off with what you see. ;)
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:iconthatfunnierpiece:
Nah. Everybody says so, it became a cliché.
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~tickersymbol Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Indeed :)
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*lombregrise Feb 10, 2013  Professional Writer
nice rhythm :rose:
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~tickersymbol Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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*rlkirkland Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your rhymes add savor and do not detract from your message, well done. :)
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~tickersymbol Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I appreciate that very much! Thank you! :)
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=DragonsChest Feb 7, 2013  Professional Writer
I like it... :clap:
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~tickersymbol Feb 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad! :D
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